Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Blog 9: Horror on the Beach

There I was just watching one of my friends kept killed by all of theses little monsters I don't no what I was thinking, I was shuddering. After they had killed Simon I just didn't believe my eyes. After they killed him I went back to go to bead. i was so hard to sleep. I was kind of a shock thinking that no my friend didn't just die no way. I thought to my self no way. He was a phosphorescence type of guy. I lye their for about a hour trying not to believe that Simon had died. I tried to convince myself that it was his fault and trying to make up stuff like that, but in the end I new that Simon was dead he got stifled and there was nothing I could do. The next morning I saw that ralph didn't take it as well. "Piggy Simon died last night you cant keep making excuses for what happened its over Simon's dead and we just stood there." Ralph had said. As he was saying this he gesticulated most of the time.t the time I still didn't believe him no matter what he had said. I now no that what he said was true. Both me and Ralph was smotheed in shame. as the day went on we were trying to find all of are tribe but aftr we did a head count there was just Ralph, Sam and Eric, two or three lttle ones and me the rest went to The Hunters. I asked Ralph if just me Sam and Eric and him go off and start a fire on a new part of the island; but Ralph gave a good point about how we couldn't keep the fire goig with four people. We tried to go on through the day and not think about last night. night fall came and we were falling aslep and then we had are little chats before we went to sleep and every thing was normal, but about ten minutes into it we get jumped out of no where some one jumps on top of my hut and they start to try and grab my glasses and unenforcible he did.

3 comments:

NicPic said...

Adam, you posted...

It was so hard to sleep. It was kind of a shock thinking that no my friend didn't just die no way. I thought to my self no way.

I liked this piece of your post becasue, you made him seem like he was trying as hard as he could to tell himself that it was not real. And this type of writing, where you write from in their head is hard. But you did a very good job on it.

But make sure that you go through your posts and read them before you post them. Just proof read!

Ana said...

Adam,
Great Job!

You really described throughout the entire blog how he couldn't beleive what had taken place the night before. Throughout the blog, I liked how he was changing his mind from yes simon was murdered, to no he wasn't. Good job especially here how they were "smothered in shame"

-stazienator

Anonymous said...

"But about ten minutes into it we get jumped out of no where some one jumps on top of my hut and they start to try and grab my glasses and unenforcible he did."

i like this one alot because it has a good lead and end