Monday, February 25, 2008

Blog 8: Sadness in the Air

There I was waking up from when I became unconscious. My nose was bleeding and I’m sore all over. My legs were killing me and it was hard to breath. I had then taken of the pig head and just started to walk. I kept walking and all I could think of at the time was to see this baste. As I was making my way towards the mountain I went past my happy place. I sat there thinking about the Lord of the Files and what he had said “Do him in that is what will happen two you unless you obey me.” All I could think of at the time was I must do as I am commanded. I no now never to lesion to The Lord of the Flies and it was my imagination and I was corruption. So off I go, slowly climbing up the mountain as I got closer I saw a piece of cloth and what looked like the sky at the time but I new it was something different so I kind of got scared, but I now no it wasn’t anything scary. It was just a parachute. I now have this thing in the sky and I think its part of the baste and I’m getting pretty scared. But I still keep going because The Lord of the Flies told me to so I keep going. Once I finally got to the top I see this gruesome dreadful thing dead hanging in the air. I was just tremulous. I had felt bad for the guy that was just dangling there and I had felt bad for this guy because he wasn’t decomposing so I untangled his parachute and he then fell to the floor. I no new that there was no baste so I thought to my self I need to tell the others. I look off into the distance and I see that every one moved to the other side to get away from the baste. I then make my way towards the campfire. Well it turns out that they didn’t move and it was Jack’s tribe. I was almost there and it turns dark. Then for a while I started to go the wrong way. I finally realized that and I then steadfast and made it to the campfire but I my legs were so messed up I had to crawl the next ten yards to the campfire. But once I was insight of the people who were there they start to beat me up because I guess they thought I was the baste. I tried to escape but they were to strong and all I could say was “Body on the hill” but no one was listening. I then was beaten to death. My blood was trickling down into the ocean and I then went to heaven.

2 comments:

NicPic said...

Adam you posted this:

I was almost there and it turns dark. Then for a while I started to go the wrong way. I finally realized that and I then steadfast and made it to the campfire but I my legs were so messed up I had to crawl the next ten yards to the campfire. But once I was insight of the people who were there they start to beat me up because I guess they thought I was the baste.



I enjoeyed this part because the last line made me laugh, "i guess they thoguht i was the beaste"
You make it seem like he does not really care, but i like the way that you wrote as if he was just talking right to us!
very nice!

Ana said...

Adam,
this blog was very good. I enjoyed reading it because i felt as though I was in his mind while he woke up from being unconciouse to when he was on the beach and was murdered. It was sad and very well thought out. remember to check spelling.

Great Job!
-stazienator