Blog 11: A Forchunut Surprise

I woke up to the smell of fresh tea and bacon. I take a shower and get some close on, then walk down to the kitchen. "good morning sheaf." said Caption Morgen with a smile on his face. Caption Morgen and his crew on the Prince of Whales had just won a big battle the other day and every one was very happy. As I was finishing up breakfast and walking up to the top deck and my first mate had told me that he had thought to have seen a bright object in the distance, so I told him to elaborate. He then told me that it was an island. As I was visualizing the sedan he also said that it had a big fire going and he thinks their are people on the small island. We had some time so I set sail to this miniseries island. I had set anker and two of my men and I. We heaveed are selves to shore. As I started to look around I saw some badly made huts, a cupple pies of clothing, and a big fire in front of me. I was pondering on weather any one is still alive or not. I started to walk down the beach and out of the jungle comes this little boy I'd say he was twelve or thirteen. I said hello but he was shy. He was badly bruised and cuts every were; he smelt bad and had long hair too. As I was talking to him more boys started to come out of the jungle they were very cower as they stood there. I tried to talk to them but they were just so traumatized after what had happened. They were very ululation as they were very hungry.

Blog 10: Fear Every Were

"Were all alone, their's no one here besides you and me." exclaimed Sam. "When are they going to let us out?" said Eric. It was cold and dark. their were faint shapes in the background as they moved back in forth. It sounded like they were discussing what they wanted to do to us. An hour goes by and Roger comes back, but this time he was pissed. Although he was the same age as us he still was bigger than us. "Get on your feet." he said. We did what were told because last time o boy last time.... lets just say that not even the bravest man alive would lesion. Now were starting to go towards the entrance of Castle Rock. "You will guard the entrance, understood?" Roger had said with a strong voice. "Understood." Sam and Eric said. "Ok, I will give both of you one spear, but let me tell you this, if you try to escape we will hunt you down and kill you. So don't try and run!" Roger said. "Ok." Both Sam and Eric were trembling and scared out of their minds. Roger gives them a mean look and then goes back into Castle Rock. "What are we going to do?" Sam said. "We are going to do as we are told, stay here and defind Castle Rock." Eric said with a tear in his eye. "Sam Eric." Ralph said in a quiet noise. "Sam Eric." They wanted to talk but they were to scard that they might get caught. Is this it for Sam and Eric? Will Ralph live? Thess are questions I want assured.

Blog 14 - Revision of "Blog 7 - Anger"

Today’s going to be a fine day I can’t weight to go hunting with Jack and all of the other kids. Roger had thought to him self. He is sore from sleeping on the ground and smells horrible because the last pig’s guts got on him and he is just not liking it. Roger gets up and goes looking for Jack. “Jack, Jack.” Said Roger quietly. It was early in the morning and just about every one was asleep. “Jack you there?” Roger exclaimed. “What do you want? I’m trying to sleep,” said Jack. “You told me to wake you up early so we can go hunting, remember?” said Roger. “Yes, yes I’m sorry, wake up the other kids were getting a pig today!” said Jack. Roger went to wake up the other boys and they all got ready. “Jack can I ask u something?” said Roger. Jack and him went off to the side and Roger sagely asked Jack about getting of the island. “We will get rescued Roger we will get rescued. Now lets catch us a pig!” Jack said. “Now boys lets try not to get that beasty to get into are heads.” Jack replied. Little did Jack no he was later going to make a blunder “Yes sir.” Said the little ones. They all sharpen their sticks and take off into the bush. They head off towards the mountain on the island. “Ok were going to take a quick look on the top of this mountain to see this beasty. Its probably covert so keep your eyes open” yelled Jack. Roger started to ponder on what he thought was going to happen. They were almost at the top and they decided to split up. I was with Ralph. They heard something and. Smack! A stick hit a pig that wondered up here. It wasn’t dead and it started to go down the hill so everyone went after it. All I saw was an infinite amount of sticks. “I did it. I caught a pig.” Said Jack. “You mean we all caught a pig,” said Ralph. “Yea what ever.” said Jack. Ralph and Jack start to get into a little argument and eventually Jack starts too snivel. It gets annoying. Roger did not like to argue with people and did not like to see people arguing. Honestly Roger thought Jack was very uncompromising. Jack was infuriating after he got in his little argument with Ralph.

Blog 13 - Revision of "Blog 9: Horror on the Beach

There I was just watching one of my friends kept killed by all of theses little monsters I don't no what I was thinking, I was shuddering. After they had killed Simon I just didn't believe my eyes. After they killed him I went back to go to bead. It was so hard to sleep. I was kind of a shock thinking that no my friend didn't just die no way. I thought to my self no way. He was a phosphorescence type of guy. I lye their for about a hour trying not to believe that Simon had died. I tried to convince myself that it was his fault and trying to make up stuff like that, but in the end I new that Simon was dead he got stifled and there was nothing I could do. The next morning I saw that Ralph didn't take it as well. "Piggy Simon died last night you cant keep making excuses for what happened its over Simon's dead and we just stood there." Ralph had said. As he was saying this he gesticulated most of the time.At the time I still didn't believe him no matter what he had said. I now no that what he said was true. Both me and Ralph was smothered in shame. As the day went on we were trying to find all of are tribe but after we did a head count there was just Ralph, Sam and Eric, two or three little ones and me the rest went to The Hunters. I asked Ralph if just me Sam and Eric and him go off and start a fire on a new part of the island; but Ralph gave a good point about how we couldn't keep the fire going with four people. We tried to go on through the day and not think about last night. Night fall came and we were falling asleep and then we had are little chats before we went to sleep and every thing was normal, but about ten minutes into it we get jumped out of no where some one jumps on top of my hut and they start to try and grab my glasses and unenforcible he did.

Blog Prompt 12: The Trial Of Jack Merridew-Trial Preparation

My name is Caption Morgan and I am the caption of the British battle ship Prince Of Whales. The Prince Of Whales is a 35,000-ton ship. The ship was built in Birkenhead. I have bin the caption of this ship now for thirty-seven years. I am fifty-three years old and I like cats. I was born in nineteen-0-two in a town called Matlock Britain. Now I am the navel officer and me and my crew of thirty-nine.

My crew and I were riding along and my first mate had seen this small island go up in flames so he goes and said “Look! Over there that island is on fire. Do you think there are people there?” I then said “Well lets go check it out, we have some extra time.” So we set off to this little island. We set an anker and three of my men and I take one of the escape boats to the island. As my men tie up the boat I go up the beach about five meters and I see this little kid, who had looked like he got attacked by an army. I mean this kid had a spear in his ribs and was all bloody. I tell my men to stay back and I start to walk towards the boy. He looked at me like I was a god; he was thin and had long hair. I was looking at him in a wary astonishment. I had said hello and he had squirmed a little and answered shyly “Hello.” I nodded to him still astonished. I then asked, “Are there any adults, any grownups with you?” The little boy shook his head. He blew me away that there was just a kid on an island. But then out of the burning forest there came two more kids and then another. All I could say was “Fun and games,” I grinned at the boy and said, “We saw your smoke. What have you bin doing? Having a war or something?” all the pour kid could do was nod. I looked at the thin kid in front of me and he needed a bath as well as the rest of them. More kids started to appear but I saw some of the kids with face paint on and it looked like a bunch of savages. “Nobody killed, I hope? Any dead bodies?” I had asked them. One said, “Only two and they have gone.” I said, “Two? Killed? What was the cause of death?” Another one said, “We had killed them.” His face was sad and he drew back into the small crowd of kids. I new they weren’t lying and the fire was getting to the point were we had to leave. “Are there any more of you? Do you no how many of you there are?” I said. “No.” they said. I was very disappointed that these British kids could no take any order. I said, “Well then lets get off this island.” We all get in the little boat and make are way to the Prince Of Whales.

We were now on the ship we put the kids on the lower level They had taken up six of the fifteen small rooms, we were packed and it was going to take a good two or three days to get back to Britain. I let them settle in and I helped bandage up for who ever needed it. “Dinner is in one hour get cleaned up and meat me in the galley.” They were very hungry let me tell you that, they looked like a pack of wolves eating every thin they barley left any food for my crew for that day. All stuffed and tired they all went to bead and it felt good that I had saved these kids. The next day, man I want to find out what had happened, as I was getting ready for the day. All of the kids were still asleep. I yelled “Get up!” they didn’t want to get up. “Get up now!” they still weren’t getting up. I was offended that they weren't lessoning to me so I pulled out my gun and shot a bullet out one of the open windows “Get up!” I said. They shot op and they were scared out of their pants. “You little kids need to lesion to me if you are going to be on my ship.” I said with a firm voices. They nodded their heads still shocked from the noise. “I want every one to get dressed and meat me on the top deck.” I said. They got ready very fast because they new I meant bisnis. “Now who was the leader of you guys before I saved you guys?” I said. One of the boys came to the front and said, “I am.” I said “And who are you?” “My name is Ralph.” Ralph said. “Now I want to here just from you what had happened.” I said.

“Well we crashed on the island and the majority of us had voted on me to be the leader, and for a while we were doing ok. We had made some huts and we had a signal fire going on the top of the mountain. But one day one of the kids said there was a beast. No one believed him until some of the kids and I saw it to. The beast lived on the top of the mountain so we were to scared to go up there and we had then lost are signal fire, after that every thing went down hill. We made a small fire. Then one day one of the kids decided that he didn’t want me to be leader and him and a couple of the other kids left and decided to start there own group. So now there are two groups my group and the other group who called themselves the Hunters. The Hunters were the ones who had always caught are meat, witch was pig. They had caught a big pig and we haven’t had meat in a while so every one was hungry. And the Hunters came back to my group and they invited any one to join them and those they had meat and they said that you were not safe with me, but they would be safe with them. Now they also stole some fire from us. So that night the Hunters had a big feast and most of my group left me to go eat and join the Hunters. When they were having the feast I even went because I was so hungry. Their leader stated to go on about how they were going to be safe with him. Then the leader of the Hunters spotted Simon and said that he was the beast. It was nighttime and you couldn't see him very well so they all attack pour Simon, and they started to do some weird chant wall they killed him. Now that is how the first kid who died.

The next day there was just four or five of us left in my group, we just tried to relax that day. So now I was pretty mad that Simon and my friend Piggy had gotten his glasses stolen died so I get every one ready and we go back and get the glasses back. They had moved to this place on the island called Castle Rock. The Hunters took the rest of my group as prisoners, they had also dropped a massive bolder on top of my friend Piggy killing him instantly. The next day they set the whole island on fire while trying to find me and then I ran onto the beach and saw you.” Said Ralph. “Wow.” I said. I didn’t no what more to say. We had made it back to Britain and they were all reunited with there parents.

Blog 9: Horror on the Beach

There I was just watching one of my friends kept killed by all of theses little monsters I don't no what I was thinking, I was shuddering. After they had killed Simon I just didn't believe my eyes. After they killed him I went back to go to bead. i was so hard to sleep. I was kind of a shock thinking that no my friend didn't just die no way. I thought to my self no way. He was a phosphorescence type of guy. I lye their for about a hour trying not to believe that Simon had died. I tried to convince myself that it was his fault and trying to make up stuff like that, but in the end I new that Simon was dead he got stifled and there was nothing I could do. The next morning I saw that ralph didn't take it as well. "Piggy Simon died last night you cant keep making excuses for what happened its over Simon's dead and we just stood there." Ralph had said. As he was saying this he gesticulated most of the time.t the time I still didn't believe him no matter what he had said. I now no that what he said was true. Both me and Ralph was smotheed in shame. as the day went on we were trying to find all of are tribe but aftr we did a head count there was just Ralph, Sam and Eric, two or three lttle ones and me the rest went to The Hunters. I asked Ralph if just me Sam and Eric and him go off and start a fire on a new part of the island; but Ralph gave a good point about how we couldn't keep the fire goig with four people. We tried to go on through the day and not think about last night. night fall came and we were falling aslep and then we had are little chats before we went to sleep and every thing was normal, but about ten minutes into it we get jumped out of no where some one jumps on top of my hut and they start to try and grab my glasses and unenforcible he did.

Blog Quest: Pivotal Scenes 2

This seen represents where they were sleeping
and I picked this seen because I thought it was
important. I thought it was important because
when they made them it was manly Ralph who
had made them and when every one else was
doing nothing or hunting Ralph and two or three
of the little ones were making shelter for the
other kids. The huts weren't that big and they did
not have very many of them, so each hut held
seven or more kids. If they didn't have the huts they would have nothing to sleep under and
they would be unconvertible.